User blog comment:Axis of Destruction/The Story Remodel Plan/@comment-5109273-20170801141534

I might be the only other one that may need to retcon or remodel the most. Most of which I've already listed to my user page. Some of this will just be restating. So here's my list.

Obi/ The Junkyosha Party

With Obi, the only thing I really plan on changing with him, is his overly violent tendancies and how far it goes. The Junkyosha Party itself just really lacks any real presence or life. So I really aim to make it seem more lively, like they're not just backdrop.

The M.C.C.P and other Agencies

I'm not going to remove them, but just like Obi; I need to retcon their behavior. It doesn't make sense for them to be taking drastic measures like the ones they're taking before the Act was even approved and even then the Act prevents them from killing any myths unless they cause mass chaos. The whole killing bit should only be necessary when the threat is too powerful or dangerous to be contained. That and the current policy of the agencies would forbid them from doing so, or risk termination. So I'm going to have to make the M.C.C.P more law-abiding towards the confines of the policy. I could also use the M.C.C.P as a means to world building. Showcasing Earth lore,technology, and the Mythos. Also there might be a need for other agencies outside of the M.C.C.P and the M.P.D. I don't care if each one of us has an agency of our own. It's just that with the world as big as it is with so many myths in it, there can't just be two agencies with one doing most of the work in regards to Myths.

Drekavas

We all know the esteemed leader of Upnation was severly broken power and story-wise. Thanks to ask though, there's a better way I can go about him. Basically have him to be a earlier stage of a CE who escaped to Fantasy. As opposed to a doctor in a merged clones body who wanted to usurp God himself.

Torikkumasuta

I still feel as if I'm making Tori abit too childish. It's like everytime I roleplay him, I just keep making him dumber and dumber. I probably just need to take a step back and figure out how I want him to be definitvely.

Exima

Everyone's favorite CRAzy-legged, racist radical who refuses to die until the assurance of the extinction of all mythology. Broken in terms of power, though not alot of people bring up his brokeness and just sort of go with it. Decided for him to have a more mundane ability, like mythic nullification or something.

Seco, Goble, and Avalia

These tree are really just left out in the open. No one knows what happened to them after the Invasion of Phoenix. I might just need to wrap their stories up or something like that.

Slang

I really just need him to come off as more of a coward-type character. Somewhat akin to Starscream or Gigan. A character who is as strong and arrogant as he is sly and deceptive, but when the first sign of things going south for him, he instantly bails or begs for mercy.

Demgel/Jonas/Jumbo

These three who somehow still managed to fight their way into the main story. Due to Demgel play an integral part to the story, in and out of it. I could very well try to revamp him. Maybe as another weapon created by the M.C.C.P that escaped. Not sure how fond everyone is of Jonas and Jumbo, but I could bring them along somehow.

More Character Pages

I'm by far the one one user with the most characters with the least pages for them. I'm going to have to the pedal on the metal with those.

There might be alot more on my end that needs to be retconed/redone. But that's what I got for now